All Comments on 'Sarlene's Touch Ch. 40'

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BrasstacksBrasstacksabout 12 years ago
And again, Fuinimel for the win!

You spoil us. You really do. 40 chapters, and still more to come.

Almandar is the man. Letting her be on top; not just a good call, but the best and only call to make. Buy that man a drink!

And Calleslyn? Such a wet dream. The woman is smooth, too smooth. The girls fall all over her, but where are the guys? I figured someone would have had to hire a few mercs to beat them to unconsciousness with ironwood clubs before they got within three blocks, or else they'd be hanging off the walls of the villa.

Smoothly written, and a nice bunch of breaks and segues. You're a true craftsman.

Thank you.

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