by Boxlicker101
breeding her at first doesnt make her better
Well, duh, of course it's a ponygirl story. I said so in a couple of places, in this chapter and in the first. As for breeding her, that's not going to happen. The Boss has a team of six ponygirls to haul him around his estate, and to display to other fanciers. In the next chapter, I will describe her being raped, and the men will be sure to use condoms, because they want to avoid knocking her up.
The story should have been classified as BDSM, as the first chapter was. I have put in a request to change it, but the request is still pending.
I like the story so far. I would have it gone in the breeding direction but the quality of you writing is so high I'm sure I'll like what ever follows. As long as the quality doesn't drop.