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All Comments on 'Satisfying My Hunger'

by RebelliousOne26

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
This would be improved

if you mentioned at the beginning that he had invited her for dinner (as well as other things). Then you would have a better closure when you mention him satisfying her hunger.

Otherwise, good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

*dessert

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