by LilGinger93
Awesome story, very different than most of the BDSM on here, thanks for sharing, I'd love to see more!
They documented the damage. He went to prison. End to stupidity.
This story seemed more on the realistic side, sadly. He seemed cocky and immature, unconcerned for her well-being, and she seemed very cocky as well. Not your typical Dom/sub story. But, it was fairly entertaining. Some women do want relationships like this. It would have been nice to have experienced once or twice, but definitely not a healthy thing as a routine. Good story overall. Maybe make it longer next time.
I agree with joodle -- your story is not a conventional BDSM story. What makes it interesting is that your female character has found in her cop an outlet for her desire for rough sex. She is assertive in her wants, definitely not weak, and is using him as much as he is using her. Their banter at the beginning sets the stage perfectly for what is to come.
Your story is written well, and I hope to read more of your work.
Ignore/delete the anonymous troll comments. They come with the Literotica landscape.
Different from most on here. Would like to see another chapter with these two. Thank you for sharing.
Please please please PLEASE disregard the comments from anonymous. Obviously there are multiple layers to a D/s relationship, and no two relationships are the same. Unfortunately, that 50 shades of Trash has everyone brainwashed.
Anyhoo, thank you so much for sharing this! It was wonderfully crafted, perfectly paced, and you even created a baseline for your leads. They aren't just a couple people who meet to fuck.
Again, please disregard the Anonymous know-it-all's. Looking forward to more!!!!