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Pretty good and you should write more. Try for greater vividness in your descriptions of sex. Read more of some of the better writers on Literotica.

Loved it!

She definitely needs to have a second or third go with her step dad and have him deposit even more sperm in her fertile pussy.

Love it;Hope to read more from you.

An amazing story, definitely worthy and needing to be continued!

CAN YOU SEND ME A PIC OF YOU samhop42@hotmail.com. your story makes me what to fuck me girlfriends daughter

THIS STORY IS JUNK NOT WORTH READING ITS JUST ABUSE WOMAN/RAPE

WHICH I HATE ,SO YOU GOT THE LOWEST MARKS I COULD FIND NOW SMARTEN UP AND START WRITING SOMETHING WORTH WHILE READING OR I WILL TAKE YOU OFF THE ''AUTHORS LIST'' TIL ISEE IMPROVEMENT.............

...............................R..................................

This is not sex, it's rape, there's a big difference.

Hot hot hot, please continue their story!

Rape should not be in here.