All Comments on 'Saturday Afternoon on a Bench'

by JimBob44

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Teamwork

I was kinda hoping he and his red furred pregnant bride would continue picking up others, only now as a team. But what the hell, it's your story. And you always write so well, sha. Love how most of your stories center around us here in sw LA and se TX. And you capture our language so well, you must be a native. You keep on writing, yeah?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good story, yeah!

Know what I'm saying, yeah?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
ending

like the ending. good that they both found happiness with each other. thank you.

rnebularrnebularabout 6 years ago
Really enjoyed this change of pace

Very nice work! This story was a nice fresh one from you. Thanks for sharing!

dinkymacdinkymacabout 6 years ago
Super!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I loved this!

Interesting style & pace. Different from the usual, yeah?

Thanks.

amadthonamadthon8 months ago

Missed this one until now, somehow. Excellent story with interesting characters and situations and hot as hell!

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