All Comments on 'Saturday Morning in the Gym'

I enjoyed reading your story and knowing that Engiish is not your native language I can disregard the grammar errors. I hope to read more of your stories.

Thank you very much to read.

I translate my stories to english countinously, but it takes long time.

If you would like, you can find one more english story on my blog. You can see the instructions on my literotica profile, how to find it.

Great ideas and worth the effort - yeah, work on the English grammer and wording, but the ideas were good. Getting the grammer right takes a long time, but you could focus on making sure you use the correct word. That is not so difficult, but it would help to have a native English speaker read your stories. With almost no effort, they could correct the miss wordings - but it you ideas that make it worth reading, so don't give up.

Thanks a lot!

Yes. Grammer is not my friend. I my native language it isn't too. But I try to change it. And it's good if you think, despite of that, my story is good.

Thank you for reading.