All Comments on 'Saturday Night at the Ritz'

one of your better stories, not to long and just short enough to hold you

...because I think you're on a real winner with this story. The eroticism in this chapter is tender and realistic, perfectly balanced and should please all of your readers. My congratulations.

Perfect way to round off the first chapter

I love the old school r+b references

Is it too much to ask for more of Olivia and Adriana , they are so sweet and tender together.

Thanks to all who have commented. There will be one more installment coming soon. It's the last story in the Oliva & Adriana (Oliviana?) Trilogy and should tie things together nicely. And to the anonymous user who enjoyed the R&B references, thank you. I have one more that I think is appropriate, however it did not come to me when writing the story. I think Marvin Gaye's Sexual Healing is perfect for their bedroom scene.

Keep going please!!!

Thanks for this story. It’s good to see Olivia has returned from her mental anguish and that Adriana hung in there to see where their love would take them.

Still misty eyed from the first chapter when I read this, but I still loved it.

I am very jealous of how well you write in first person something I can rarely achieve.

Mmm. Very sweet and tender. Thanks.

What is more fabulous than fabulous? This was so frigging sexy. Thanks. Now on to meeting the family. Oh, olivia, you are one very lucky woman.

Really, really excellent! Thank you for sharing it with us!

(because that's another song title), to takin' off the clothes. And how about that shower scene? After that, I need a cold one myself!

I appreciate not having the character's breast sizes, hair colour, hight and facial features described in excruciating detail. A lovely story. More in the realm of erotic fiction instead of the usual pornography that's offered on this site. Thank you.

Sorry, but "Putting on the Ritz" will 9 times out of 10 bring memories of Young Frankenstein to those of a certain generation!!

Gene Wilder and Peter Boyle forever changed this song from being almost a high society classic to one of the funniest songs to be reproduced on celluloid.

great part 2 btw WP.

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A lovely story, not complicated but dripping in WaxPhilosophic class.