All Comments on 'Saturday's Child'

Normally I'm not a big fan of sequels. The point where people learn something is generally the place to stop. But this is just temporary: they need to find their way through it together, so let us have some more of Sadie and Luke.

Good story very well written. One note, in Clark County, where Las Vegas is located, the county sheriffs department and the Las Vegas Police Department are combined into the Las Vegas Metropolitan Police Department, of which the sheriff is the head. So, a Metro cop from Vegas, would still be in her jurisdiction at the location described, and would call for back up, not a sherrif.

Your writing is very well thought out. Taking the female perspective is bold. Having Sadie become a partner in the rescue effort while getting lots of sex, described in detail, from Lucas would be delicious.

Good start. Now finish it please.

But, I must agree with the other commenters on it's ending, or lack thereof. So many incomplete avenues not yet explored. Five easy stars and linked to several friends. Thank you,

Rasmat

(still working to straighten out my password debacle)