by Jen24
I like this story very much. The writing, the words, location, and characters. All first class.
A winner in my mind.
My best wishes
The idea was good and had a lot of potential.
But the actual story did not deliver. Neither a proper history, nor a proper story. And several typos and errors to boot.
- JT
Despite the mistakes, I voted 5 because I enjoyed some of the style used and some of the language.
well done.