All Comments on 'Saudade'

I cried, I am tempted to give this god awful story 1 star for ruining my day, but I also can't, because it's so well made, but still, fuck you for doing this to me

I am tempted to give this god awful story 1 star for ruining my day, but I can't because it was so well made, well, fuck you for messing with my emotions

I like your 'Adolf who?' ending. bumbum....this is still the darkest timeline. The day did feel so perfect, like too perfect. Just like with Mia, things were too good to be true. way to pull the rug out.

I love your stories.

This one is another wonderful read. Besides its passion went under my skin, its end made me thinkful.

Finally it opened my eyes again for the people we tend to take for granted. We got used to them being around. But they are not for granted. Noone knows about tomorrow. So why waiting?

If one feels like showing devotion, care, love, friendship. The right time is now. Not later, not tomorrow. Not too late. Right now!

Thank you for reminding me.

This is so crazy good. So deep. I momentarily could not see to read as my eyes revealed my pained heart of love lost. Bravo LaRascasse. Bravo!

Very nice! I missed the start of the contest. I will say that your fellow contestants have written an entry in this category for the upcoming Western event that is the sickness! I think you'll love it. Be sure to catch it on Thanksgiving. Again, well done. Thanks for the story, Randi.

Bravo. Wonderfully done.

Nobody does bittersweet like you.

I loved this I almost cried and I never cry

Another wonderful story stumbled on by accident. It's long been a principle of time-travel SF that when history is altered, time will struggle to return to its original course in one way or another. That principle is handled so well in this story, heart-wrenching though the denouement is. Excellent piece of work.

Relight my fire and then PLEASE STAY …. But heart wrenching heart breaking …. Time traveling, we already opened the Pandora’s box with the www but time traveling - speechless

One point out of it, take care every day and love those next to you with all your energy possible, it could be the last moment …. Absolutely true

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