All Comments on 'Savannah 04'

And of course that made me do it again and again and again! Bloody brilliant.

May I ask if Amanda is based on you?

As usual a 5!

Brilliantly done. Both this part that deals with brother/sister incest as wonderfully as anything I have ever written, and the previous three are extremely well written. Thanks Giorgie

I'm really loving this splendid tale.

It's pretty much impossible to second guess each chapter and that makes it all the more interesting.

I hope you are getting as much satisfaction from re-reading it as you go along, as you did when originally composing the story.

Great writing!

Amanda said fairfax and she were falling in love. I don't believe any man would let his woman fuck anyone for any cause.1

..... just keeps getting better and better.