All Comments on 'Savannah's First Time'

Needs to be placed in the nonconsensual section. Storyline is missing, reads more like a story outline. I would advise expanding with character definition.

Arrest the bum and throw him in jail.

Very moving; it sounds like whoever this was was a real creep.

That was the worst story i have ever read. no characterization, no plotline. no nothing. just a fuck session. Think next time we can try a bit harder with these stories.