by Adsta
its got a good start, characters there to develop, hope to read more about James and how he resolves his own relationship before he does anything else, I'll read another chapter
The title caught my eye, and so I decided to read your story. I liked the set up, and I really like the characters already. I am looking forward to more. Thanks. Jeff
However slow down on the sexy reaction Bear and Cub are having. Having their relationship start of as sexual would be a mistake. For their connection to be strong enough to go long term it needs to based on an emotional connection.
Can't wait for the rest of the chapters...cant wait for their Romance to bloom ❤