All Comments on 'Saved by the Cub Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
keep going

its got a good start, characters there to develop, hope to read more about James and how he resolves his own relationship before he does anything else, I'll read another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good start!

The title caught my eye, and so I decided to read your story. I liked the set up, and I really like the characters already. I am looking forward to more. Thanks. Jeff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Strong begining

However slow down on the sexy reaction Bear and Cub are having. Having their relationship start of as sexual would be a mistake. For their connection to be strong enough to go long term it needs to based on an emotional connection.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More chapters Please!!!

Can't wait for the rest of the chapters...cant wait for their Romance to bloom ❤

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Bald!?

I stopped reading after he said he was bald.

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