All Comments on 'Saving Deloria Ch. 01'

Invigorating, amazing work! I was spellbound the whole time reading your lovely work of art, I can't wait to read more of Deloria & Kyle.

I miss that first time lover's lust feeling so much and it's magical to read how you portray it so well here. Please don't hesitate to post more!!

Hello all,

Thanks for reading. The next chapter for Deloria & Kyle is coming soon. Another story caught me by the throat and will be up soon. So chapter 2 has been delayed but not forgotten. Keep an eye out for my next story.

I like it I'm glad she fell in love with Kyle and not just because of Julian, looking forward to more.

Will she actually sit down with him and tell him that she knew Christian. Yes all the sex was hot but I would have liked her to tell him her history.Just sayin'!

i love this story hope you will write more