All Comments on 'Saving Lucian Ch. 02'

Dog shit interracial pile, just same old shit.

I love how patiently your story is shaping up. It is very even in pace but brimming with great anticipation. Your characters are very rich with detail. You have our attention; please don't stop. Waiting to shift gears to overdrive.

i think this story is really good don't listen to the dumb person 2 below me i think it is good

I like where this is going so far.

I really did enjoy this story. It was so nicely written. I do not think it needs to go any further; although, as it now stands, it isn't reallyh a Literotica story.

At any rate, I do hope you will continue to write whether the writing appears in Literotica or not, you write clearly, have wonderful eye for detail and, most importantly, write in a way that keeps me reading.

I know its gonna get good.