All Comments on 'Saving Natasha Ch. 01'

This is a great story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.

it takes a real man to beat up a woman And I would bet he gets his ass kicked by other men quite often if not other men probably babys in their cribs IT takes areal man to beat up a woman Tenbears 43

I guess going to the police is out of the question. They could've filed a report and still run away.

well written , unusual plot / protagonists . get the feeling Liam is fairly young "gamer"

not much info on Natasha & her husband to allow the reader to put them in an age bracket .. although the " school teacher " before they were married ..invites the reader to think that she is maybe 5 or 10 years older than Liam ... maybe you can flesh that element out in next chapter .

loved it , looking forward to reading more .

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

Look, I know it's free, I know you try, but for FUCK'S SAKE your tense change and other errors are so frustrating for me. There are people on this site who will proofread your stuff for free. Avail yourself of them. This is a nice story, but it is ruined by your atrocious lack of attention to detail. Unfortunately, it makes the story unreadable.