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xedarxedaralmost 12 years ago

very nice. Would i be correct in assuming this is only the first chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great 1st chapter

great story hope u made a chapter 2 curious 2 no why savannah wished she wasnt awake lookin 4ward 2 chapter 2 and chapter 6 for buffy blackmail

DanielOrmeDanielOrmealmost 12 years ago
Sensational Savarti!

I love Savannah/Marti, and this is one of the best I've read. Chapter 2 soon, please.

KMB2476KMB2476almost 12 years ago

This is definitely a real change of pace for you and extremely well done. I love the more gentle, sensual style here. This one really pulsates with heat, of course how can it not when it's Aly and Ashley hooking up

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