All Comments on 'Savory Sharon'

The story was pretty good and moved along. But when Rosey came to tend the gsrden wioth Sam, instead of Josey, it got confusing. Then it took a turn to fantasy and not believable

This is one of yor best works yet. Keeping them cumming.

This is one of yor best works yet. Keeping them cumming.

I loved the story up to a certian point. I lost interest when Big Sam took over and took May and Alice away from Sharon. After all Sam knew that Sharon had designs on them, and it's not like Sam doesn't have enough women at her disposal.

NO she has to more in on Sharons neighbors, cutting Sharon out.. The sex here is GREAT, I guess I will read 1 more chapter at least part of it to see where you are going with everyone...Thanks.

Paul

All the women talk alike, no one uses contractions, and they sound link something out of a victorian melodrama. ugh.

Please dońt stop and continue.

Интересная история. Жалко, что я узнал об авторе так поздно. И очень жаль, что он перестал писать. Ведь некоторые истории, на мой взгляд, требуют продолжения.

3 pages of bad story telling.