All Comments on 'Scally Delights Ch. 01: Dale Ma' Boy'

by XTALES

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jt_hooksjt_hooksalmost 6 years ago

How did Dale go from hard as a rock needing to breed when Dave was feeling him from outside his pants to soft and not getting hard when he reached into the pants?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot story

Really enjoyed this one. Look forward to the next chapter.

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 5 years ago
Such a disappointment that you stopped

Please continue this story!

Donald

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More, please.

Love the age difference and lust for more. Please continue and maybe show the boy dominating the older guy? A natural development. Chapter One got me hard!!!

XTALESXTALESover 5 years agoAuthor
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Thanks for the compliments.

I am working on other stories at the moment, but I will write a second chapter soon.

@jt_hooks Sorry about that.

I usually don't make those mistakes, and I utterly hate when there are such inconsistencies in the stories I read.

I usually re-read my stories 4-5 times before publishing them, but every time I read them, I also make changes.

In this case I changed something at the last minute without adjusting the story accordingly.

My bad.

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