All Comments on 'Scenario 01: Getting the Edge Off'

There was much to like about this story. It was well written, although when describing the money shot, "sprayed" would probably have been a better word choice than "splayed"--which better describes the protagonist's position on the couch. The progression from her resolve to be a good girl and keep things light and non-erotic to finally yielding to temptation and masturbating was very natural and credible, as well as the event that led to her getting caught. I'm even OK with how extremely nice the guy was, not taking the least bit of advantage of her, when most would have...the ending was sweet...but enough with the 10.5" dicks already! It's one thing to say it's big, but put away the measuring tape; leave your readership with something we can believe.

Holy fuck,you just made me cum all over my bed sheets and all over my stomach,oh how I wish you were here to lick it off baby.mmm.