All Comments on 'Scene 01. Kitchen. Licking. Fucking.'

A great descriptive piece of writing--but who are this nameless couple. We need a sequel to find out the details...and to enjoy more of their hot coupling.

This could be a very clever way of constructing a story by giving us one snippet at a time until we piece the whole thing together. Sort of like putting together a jigsaw puzzle by assembling a couple of dozen pieces scattered here and there inside a large border until the assemblies finally connect and the whole picture emerges.

Nice description of the sex.