All Comments on 'Scented Bower'

Has been reviewed on the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

FtF

You will love this story as it is totally erotic! Hope many more chapters to follow and soon!

The original theme using varied elements of pagan ritual is quite captivating, but the whole story could do with some polishing or fine-tuning. Sexual episodes are brief and hold attention, but there are some major distractions e.g. numerous misspelled words.