All Comments on 'Schism Pt. 03 (conclusion)'

Nice twist. :D

A literal mind-fuck representation of the conflicts any of us might be working to embrace and come to terms with.

Plus, hot and dirty, fuck, yeah.

I'm of three minds about it. ;)

Got to keep this going please

I liked it, and loved the sex. I'm still unsure about the disassociation and if this was true, I would be very pissed off on behalf of Dane. Dane should share everything now he's to terms with Cock.

You're very gifted and I really like that you keep finding new angles to explore an old subject. I swear if you could hear how often your stories ring my bells I would be providing chimes for every church in the country.

I love all your stories. Truly. You’re a talented writer Jason Clearwater. And incredibly imaginative!! Keep them coming 🤩🤩🤩

Thanks for the feedback, folks.

Etaski, ;)

Divergurl - honestly, I'm not sure where I would take it from here. Any suggestions?

notusuallyshy - thank you kindly. I imagine that Dane would need to come up for air, not least to figure out if he still likes women, and to see what Aden's told his girlfriend. But I also imagine he needs a period to adjust, and that Aden's sorting a few things out for him to help make that transition. (I'm also quite pleased to hear you're keeping your neighbourhood awake there. :-P)

Anon, thank you. :-)

I don't know how you kept this all straight in your mind...but excellent!

Great job...keep it up and keep it real!

Amazing. All 3 parts are really good but damm! Third installment? Pure gold. I don't think I've read better, and I've read everything from the assmg days, most of nifty, and a good chunk of literotica. Thank you!

Excellent from beginning to end. Creative and surprising. Well done!

Wow. Excellent. Super upper excellent. Waiting for the movie.....

This is definitely one of the most original and well thought out stories that I have read in this genre. I will admit that it was a bit of a transition having just read a story involving alien tentacle sex monsters raping everyone they come into contact with right before choosing to read this psychological thriller, but once i got into it I was hooked and enjoyed the change of pace. While i tend to forget most of these stories soon after reading them this is one that I will remember for a while, and that is a compliment to the author so jeep writing and kudos from Atlanta, GA!