All Comments on 'School Dance'

delightful story, barbie - delightfully expressed.

Decent story... would have been good if you'd spent any time with it -- a real disappointment.

This story would have been just extremely exquisite if you had gotten your brain out of your balls and back into your head and thought about what you wrote. If you'd like to see how something like this should be written, visit Kristen Archives.com and read what I, Dr.T, have written. You definitely have potential, but it needs expressed better.

I am pretty easy to please but this was shocking! The whole innocent factor can be a real turn on but this was taking it waaaaay too far!

the innocent factor was taken wayy too far.....

Mmm I wish I was that slutty lil school girl mmm I came nice n hard

Yes, an innocent girl is very much a turn on. But in this day and age I don't care how over protective your parents are, you can't no know what sex or what a penis is. And no cherry popping? You left out the best part.

So unrealistic. How did she forget panties?

Learn literally anything about female anatomy