by Sad_Renegade
... cliffhanger. Hot story.
Sad renegade? I don't think so somehow ;)
Fanny x
Try and get your fantasies straight. This seems to be set in the US, and here you don't go to law school or medical school straight out of high school. Takes a four year college first.
this puppy needs much work.
Either you're ESL, or you're still in high school.
Harvard Med? Non sequitur. You don't have the talent for it. Makes for a bad fantasy.
This is just a story it's make believe. So it dose not matter how the person wrote it. I found it to be a nice read with the ending having one hell of a cliffhanger. So if all of what you're going to do is be nothing more than criticizing assholes just shut up and move to some other stories.
Ok, surprise ending. A) Didnt lock the door? Or did the guy who wont take "get lost" for the end of a relationship have a key? B) I know it's Erotic Couplings category, but sex at 1st meeting? Sure it wasnt like "Hi! Wanna get your dick wet?" But still, that was a stretch. C) Did Goober Boy (QB) bring his 9 to school? Looking forward to more submissions from you.