All Comments on 'School Days'

and tell Erin to open her eyes. It's better that way.

YOu write beautifully. This was a wonderful love story. I didn't see anything pornographic. I look forward to reading more of your works.

please continue.....it is wonderful!

Great story! Please continue and let us know what happens.

What a great story. Written with class and very dignified this writer has talent and grace.

All best, JuLee

great build up, nice flow to the story. Very believable and can't wait to see how it cums off

Need more of this story - please continue

Yes, please continue the delightful adventures of these two wonderful women! So very well written and developed. Of course it was also so very hot to boot!

You nailed this one! A tease up front to generate interest, great character development for a short story, interesting story line. Nice style, and edited for grammar and spelling, too. Truly a fun read!

Great build up, very well done, something the rest of us could learn from. Thank-you & please continue...

I really enjoyed how you jumped right in, then backed off and rebuilt the story. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

You did a great job with Ch. 01. It was hot as hell. Now for Ch. 02. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Wow! That was so hot. Please continue. I want more.

...the more I read the more involved with the characters I became. Once more, I am amazed at the pure eroticism stories like this invoke. The beauty and incredible heat generated by girl/girl love is just so different and is hot in a way that attracts straight men like flies to honey. Go figure...Surely this cannot be the first comment you've received in 2006? You show great promise...

Marly, Wonderfully written. I too look forward to more from you. It would be such a waste of talent if you didn't continue. I might add that it always adds a little erotism if you mention whether or not stories are based on personal experiences. Thanks for making my day! Ken

This story was fabulous! A terrific combination of emotion and sensuality! I eagerly anticipate the next chapter!

Even though it appears to be happening too fast, it's believable. I picture you writing in the first person, and it becomes hotter.

Rich

Although a man, your erotic presentation makes me want to start eating their pussy and never stoping. A truly erotic story. Yes, please continue!

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