All Comments on 'School Photos Ch. 04-05'

If it *is* the end

Please continue!

would love to see him handle Jen to, maybe a 3some Jen & Susie

Did I imagine it, or did the name of Susie's ex change from Dougie to Nick?

Which I do hope you'll tell us soon.

A) She's a cockteasing bitch

2) She reminds me of one of MY exs (not in a good way)

and C) Susie is where it's at!

Granted, more action with the sister would have been better. But hey, story for another day!

Not much of an erotic story. Except two hand jobs and a little topless there isn't much of sex in your story.

With less sex it's more realistic. Well told story much more believable than most of the ones where there is way too much sex and way too fast so it is completely unbelievable and therefore just FLUFF. Good job

once again a story ruined by a writer adding group sex to a incest story. when it comes to incest it HAS to be kept to just the two relatives only adding anyone increases the risk of someone getting hurt and telling sending both relatives to jail. KEEP THE OUTSIDERS OUT OF IT.

Great to have a story that didn't rush into the sex nor try to tell us everyone had the perfect body. Very believable.

Nobody other than Kali and her brother DO know they're having sex.

This series is fantastic! Well written, well paced, and most importantly, entertaining. I love it.

incest is suposed to be kept to a minimum of people involved the way this is written is just plain crazy. always remember "KISS - KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID" another story ruined by a greedy wannabe writer.

adding the freinds ruined the story it should have been only the siblings having sex no one else, it just gets to risky and dangerous. you also should have waited to post anything until the whole story was finished and posted them as one chapter. the first two chapters were so short it was a waste of time posting them all together they make a four page chapter and should have been posted that way. get a good editor delete the series rewrite it leaving out any sex with the other girls and repost it as one chapter.

I have no problem with the way you went with your story .Might have enjoyed it another way who knows but it would be pretty dull if they were all the same.I liked it!

I enjoyed these short stories a lot and would like to hear more about his sexscapades with the Kali and Sisie. I wouuld especially like to find out how Jan failed to get him away from Susie and his first time with his sister. I normally want a love affair between the siblings and like some others like to keep it monogomous but as from the start you obviously never set out to do that then it is unimpoirtant to this story and it makes no difference to the enjoyment of the little series. Please revisit these characters soon and give us more!

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Okay, it's been several years.

Nicely done and well written. I'm glad he did not fall for Jen's antics. I would love to see more.

It's another day already, come on! more!

Good story. Thanks.