All Comments on 'Schoolgirl Uniform; Danielle Ch. 03'

The end of the episode, I hope, not the end of the story?

There must be more, so many ways this can go after this initial entrance to group play. At some point, Mr. Grants daughter might also get involved, hope so anyhow.

I hope your not done with this. There could be so much more even a continuation of the third chapter.

I especially enjoy your use of seduction/coercion and the subsequent surrender.

I pictured myself in Danielle's shoes all the time while reading the three stories - boy, I'd love to be in her place and be used by so many cocks! Great work!

She is 18. What the fuck? You believe an 18 year old should have more than 3 lovers for her to be considered a more 'experienced' sexually active girl?

I get this is fantasy, but when you talk stupidity like that it ruins the fantasy, for me. You may also want to enhance and add to your vocabulary. Describing her as a naughty girl or naughty little slut multiple times quickly gets boring.

Vividly written, highly erotic! Very much enjoyed this 3part story ~ thank you!

The more I read the more I began to dislike your writing. Think up some new words besides oh god oh yes and such a good slut etc. boring.