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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Fantasia

Not brilliant - but real cute - and near enough the fantasy of many of us! Keep writing.

Lukas

IndyMSpankUIndyMSpankUover 19 years ago
needs more development

A nice start for a first attempt, but it needs more character and plot development, and just needs to be longer.

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