All Comments on 'School's Out Ch. 01'

Loved it. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Great writing - both playful and steamy, what a great combination! Can't wait to read future installments =)

Well written, well edited, well paced. In short, I loved it. Please hit us with chapter 2 very soon.

Steamy and sexy, with just the right amount of dialouge.

loved it, hurry with ch 2!

Great story

Well done!!! Great first time, first love story.

Wonderful Dave. Loved reading every part of it. ;)

M

You can tell we like your story by the rating. Really would like to see chapter 2.

Great! I really liked your story. I'm waiting for the next chapter(-s)

Please

Thanks for the story! Good character development and nice buildup. Lots of exciting possibilities here.

Yes please. Chapter 2 ...

Very good . I'm glad I found this after further chapters were written.