by Goldeniangel
You had a great, fun, sexy story until the end. You dropped the ball on the one yard line. Keep writing, I'll expect better from you.
I agree... the story was great!!! Just delete the very last paragraph ;)
Apart from that... loved it.
Some spots where I think your wording could be better, and you should develop or at least describe your characters a little. Also, some more detail about the plant and how it senses it's "prey" would be good.
Otherwise, an interesting story. I like that the plant turned on it's creator, and it taking pictures of them was a nice touch, though a bit hard to believe. This is where some more detail about the plant would be helpful. Is their some element of it's genetic manipulation that could explain this?
This is a great story! Very hot! The ex-couple dynamic was also very good. Also who doesn't love a fun horny plant? Thank you for sharing it!
He is damn lucky that his ex-wife did not have a lawyer take his testicles for his kidnapping of her, and then her non-consent ravishment by his science experiment without proper safeguards.