All Comments on 'Scorcher'

Damn!

Very naughty, and very well written. You'll be sure to produce another excellent story now that you're back with us - good luck!

And whoever said Mommies weren't sexy and can't have some fun? ;)

Linda doesn't need enemies, does she?

Very nicely done. Perhaps some additional angst about the moral conflict would have heightened the sexual tension. Nevertheless it was a very enjoyable story and I hope there is more in the future.

Well written and very erotic.