All Comments on 'Scott's Unique Christmas Present'

by Bethyboo

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Thunderhead69Thunderhead69over 12 years ago
Excellent Erotic Adventure

I love your style of writing and your stories flow so well. Thanks for writing and keep up the great submissions as well as the use of the c-word. It makes me so hard!

BarbaraBarbaraover 12 years ago
Unexpectedly erotic, well constructed challenge for any younger masochist writer? Worth 5 +!

Rarely experienced but thoroughly enjoyable literary masterpiece! Genital pain should be a prerequisite, for every anally experienced female reader! Has Bethyboo ever been placed in a similar vulnerable situation, attaining the "Zone" of ultimate sexual pleasure?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
vary hot

i like the story its amazing, but its need some background build up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
HOT, HOT, HOT

So, my only question is, when do we start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

Very sexy. Wonderful idea and terrific imagery

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Unutterably Hot

Needs a copy edit, but who cares? Stiff dick beats grammar any day.

deadeye_76deadeye_76over 12 years ago
Oh, please...

please, please, can you plan what I'll get for Christmas??!?!?!

I love the story line. Can't wait for more from Bethyboo

pin_mrpin_mrover 12 years ago
Putting u on my christmas list

Well bethyboo....i cant wait to look under my tree.. hoping to find you wrapped and ready to go.....great story, looking forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Merry X-mas

I am "Scott" and I do so hope to taste my little x-mas present very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great

Liked the mix of pain and pleasure i think you turned me lesbian

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is so amazing

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