All Comments on 'Screaming for Sir'

Not one mention of lube for the anal. Don't think he'd like what I would be screaming at him. Also, we're left wondering if he washed his dick between anal and pussy. Seemingly small details, but without making them part of the action, it is easy for a reader to get pulled out of the action with a wait a damn minute feeling.

Other than those omissions, this is good.