by romancer
Really enjoyed your story, that I have quite a few things in common with your main character enabled me to connect with him very well. Thanks for posting it.
Pete.
Great writing and such a tender, gentle story. Of course, she invited him to her wedding and they never spoke of it again.
Loved this story! It hit home for me in many ways. I also have a college first love lost that I have regretted for 35 years. I would give anything to have a second chance at the original! Keep up the good writing. A second part would be welcome!
So tired of people hung up on age. If it it works, go with it. Fran neglected her heart for money, Lissa is neglecting it for age. Kind of sad, really.
I thought the basic story was a fantasy and a bit improvable. However, I also felt that the ending was quite realistic.
and I sometimes wonder if some still think of me ... Sorry if I don't offer any suggestions about your writing but I like it the way you do it.
A wonderful story. The end is magical. Well done. Everyone may think and imagine how it will go on with the two.
Oh yes, and I also got to know Diana Krall and thanks to the internet I heard her during the whole time I was reading and ... also in the future.
Best regards from Germany.