All Comments on 'Sculpted Lines'

by ZackOShea

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

"Trust me?" .... Ending the story with that line was simply perfect. Very nice indeed! Although the succubus nature of Pi versus Eddie's humanity/mortality -- I believe you may have slightly hinted at it with Pi's 'soft sound of worry' -- remains an untouched issue. But that remains to be seen. Perhaps in the next installment then?

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you very much! I hope you keep enjoying the work.

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