by elly bee
I thought this was well done and even pretty original. Pretty good story.
You promised you wouldnt write about our personal activities..........Im very dissapointed in you
it awakens those primal urges that are dormant in us all. To use....simply..merely...to USE!!!
I liked this story more than I thought I would. While I applaud the details and character development, I could have gotten turned on a bit more were it not for most of Bucky's Repulsive qualities...the rotted teeth, putrid smelling dick, food-encrusted beard...but the story was more original than 99% of the stuff I've read here and you managed to capture the setting and define the characters without a whole lot of wasted exposition. The sex act and dialogue added a great deal to the nastiness of the tale and in the end I found it strangely erotic. Good job. I hope you write more.
loved the writing....as well written as any story I've read at this site. It wasn't really erotic though....Bucky was too disgusting. I am sorry that you haven't done more at this site, you write so well.
I find this story rather insulting; having been born, raised, and traveled considerably in West Virginia the picture painted by this author lacks truth about the culture and depth.