All Comments on 'Sea Sickness Ch. 04'

by Athena_e19

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GRANGERGRANGERover 17 years ago
Tremendous Story

Great story thusfar. Keep it going. I can just visualize one young man having more pussy than he can keep up with. But, the women won't be left out.

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 17 years ago
Great Slow Seduction!

Great story so far! Looking forward to next chapter. Alexis and Ryan make a great couple. Now, onto Mom!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
mmmmmmmmm

I was delighted to see the sister finally suck his cock after he'd got to fuck her a few times! Awesome - and a cute swallow on her first bj! How lucky is this guy to be surrounded by beautiful women all of whom seem destined to share their pussies, mouths and assholes with him. Nice story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Mud??

I loved that you has Allyson sit on Sandra’s face but the mud, specially that deep (requiring added expo) was a bit of a killjoy (distraction) for me. Perhaps an edit where there wasn’t that much mud or they had water bottles to slash it away from face and pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your writing is exemplary!

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