All Comments on 'Sea Slimes Ch. 09'

Needless to say another piece of great storytelling. I just hope we can see a bit more slime action before the story gets wrapped up :P This is easily my most favorite story of the bunch. Keep up the good work :)

Welcome back and thank you for this great chapter. I imagine that Loweina is a cuttlefish type Mermaid. Genius. I don't really have much to comment about the chapter, it was all very well done. The only thing I might have to say is how much I enjoy the erotic hypnosis that you write, it's one of the primary reasons why I enjoy your stories so much along with the interesting plots. Hypnosis is a rare subsection of erotica, but when you find someone like you who write it so well you get to appreciate why it can be so hot. Looking forward to next chapter.

You continue to inspire me with your perfect works of art. Thank you for reading my work as well! You truly are my Literotica idol!

Thanks, guys! These kind words made my day. It's good to be back. :)

@voidgolem: I SO wish I'd thought of a cuttlefish mermaid. Like dryads, mermaids (and mermen) just present infinite possibilities to me—lamb's ear dryads, jellyfish mermaids, lavender dryads (see my Tumblr for more info on those), shark mermaids... Sadly, this ain't a cuttlefish. Cuttlefish aren't generally deep-sea. It's actually the lanternfish, a very common deep-sea fish (hence her being a bit of a "filthy peasant"). "Loweina" is a small genus of lanternfish. Deep sea merfolk in general are GOOD at hypnosis, since most of them have some sort of "luminescence".

That said, rest assured that cuttlefish mermaids are going to show up at some point now, thanks to your feedback. Because cuttlefish rule. ;D

@Anonymous: One of my few regrets of this story is that I introduced both a jellyfish mermaid and a slime girl species in the same story. I fell in love with both concepts, and I feel like in the process, slime girls got kinda shunted. There IS a bit more slime girl action coming up, but not as much as I wish there'd been. I'll try to make it up to you sometime! :P

@thegreat_pretender: I really liked your stories! Keep writing 'em, and I'll keep reading 'em! Let me know if you ever want any critical feedback!

I've only recently discovered your profile, but I'm now completely caught up. Your writing style is amazing - it really brings the reader into the story. Keep up the amazing work!

Great writing as always. Keep up the good work.

I've been following your works since 2014 and your stories always keep me transfixed! Whenever I start a chapter, I can hardly make myself put my phone down. I'm eager to find out how snatch's story will pan out and if Latoya will team up with him again after the forest. I've also started to read the stories to my wife and she can't wait to hear more about the, succubus and bar maids, the shapeshifter and kitsune. Simply put, we can't get enough of this wonderful world you have created.

Sorry my auto correct changed Larya's name.

I always imagined Theives' Cant to be a bit like Cockney slang. Is there a translation guide or do you just make it up?

As nice as the sexy parts are, I think I'd enjoy these stories even without that aspect. I love your work and I'll definitely be following up on these adventures.