by serialscribbler
I liked the story, but was disappointed with the sex. I wanna know what she felt, smelled, heard and emotions. Add details that put me in the room so I escape my reality for just a few sweet minutes. Please write more stories and give us the details of the experience so I can experience it myself.
Many teens are face with attraction and sometimes denial just like this. Glad some resolution happens
I cannot thank you enough for writing my 'fantasy'. You have described Paula's family perfectly. It is so erotic 'watching' your wife fuck another guy for the first time and to also see your mother in law undressed and having her pussy eaten. I love your writing style and look forward to reading all your new submissions. If this story continues to receive positive feedback I hope you can find time to write a second part. Once again thank you x