All Comments on 'Searching Light: Down the Wormhole'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
hmmm

The plot is not exactly new (Star Trek Voyager) and the sex was quite short and "uninspired" - no lovers, just fuckers. And of course, in this future, every woman likes cumshots on her skin without beeing asked ?

FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 6 years ago
Nice introduction

OPEN ENDED you can go in so many ways with this story. small cast of characters but unlimited interaction with the outside totally new and unexplored part of space. Please continue this story line. Maybe a world with semi humanoid folk just climbing out of the planets gravity well and entering space. No prime directive needed in this story please.

Powertool79Powertool79about 6 years ago
Wing commander....

and Executive Office (XO) are mutually exclusive positions. You can't be both.

Secret_Passion2018Secret_Passion2018about 6 years agoAuthor
Science fiction...

They can in my universe! Lmao...

It was designed as an introductions - yes - lots of stolen ideas but nothing new there. Thanks for the feedback on all counts!

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If you’re looking for my ‘To The Victor’ story I have taken it down as it will soon be available on Amazon for free hopefully.