All Comments on 'Second Blossom Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome

Awesome story !

Please continue I love this story !!!!!!

irishcream44irishcream44about 6 years ago
It would still be nice

to know what happened with Chapter 4. ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
a mothers love

very loving MOTHER KNOWS BEST

JEN A LOVING WIDOW

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Tag line Error?

Should the tag line not be "Chelsea and her STEP- son savor the morning after"?

If you want to fraudulently place your story in the category which has the largest readership, then at the very least say that the chap is a step-son and NOT her son.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This needs more chapters

You need to have him confront versa I think she got laid by someone eles and is playing him , he should get his movie reward and should end up with his step mom for ever in love have them get married and they have a kid together E57C

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
Incest not quite

Technically maybe, but with dad out of the picture, sex with dad's former wife not really cutting the big inc. Just name calling each other mother and son is a bit weak.

Forgotten the early chapters so all seems lovey dovey, so why bother chasing the bitch ex girlfriend. She seems the type to forget.

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 1 year ago

(1/29/2023) I like the premise of this story very much but the single-page chapters are becoming tedious. I see this as more of a love story between a guy in love with his best friend's girlfriend or wife and her returning his affection; leading to him stealing her away from the friend. The idea that she is married to his dad just makes the relationship more salacious which makes it hot but I see no incest here, only roll play. Also, too much juice, IMO. They’re not sleeping on a wet spot but on a lake.

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