All Comments on 'Second Chance Ch. 13-16'

That was so beautiful :)

Don't let this be the end...give us more!

Wow I loved every moment of this :) I read both series in one day. Keep the good work. I loved it you are an awesome writer. Thank you for sharing :) punpkyn_sf

I loved both of your stories. I hope you keep it up would love to read a continuation of the DeGeo families. :)

Keep it up !

i love this story. i had read the first story but lost it so i couldnt get back. im so glad i found u.

I really loved the story the timeline between the past and the present was a bit confusing by otherwise it was amazing 5 stars please write more stories

Very absorbing and enjoyable story. Well done.

A gunshot would to the kidney would NOT result in a still functioning kidney.

Super story. Well constructed and a page turner.

Great storyline that was excellent from start to finish. 5/5

It was an overall good story. I loved the humour through it, and was sad to see it decreased as the tale went on.

The story of Callie and Jerry just left me cold.

Kidnapping someone to gain their affection. Really?

Then handcuffing her? How is that going to help start a loving relationship?

Then cutting her clothes off and forcing yourself on her after she has said no. That's rape. Pure and simple.

But wait. it gets worse. This woman who to protect her son has put up with years of sorrow and loneliness, culminating in being beaten and abused, suddenly has a change of heart after 10 seconds of being raped. What is it? Like forget my sons well being, I need some cock.

To me that is just poor writing. Surely there must have been a dozen different ways for them to be reconciled with out the violence and rape.