All Comments on 'Second Honeymoon'

You are not only a piss poor writer but you are deranged too.

Perhaps the only thing better than this is if the subjects were your parents or family members.

Now, this here is why I don't enter any kind of sweepstakes......

Thank you for writing this - very good enjoyed it!

The story goes back to the time of Africans driven to slavery by the Arabs.

In the modern society, this too is still happening in Southern Sudan. The

Human Rights are keeping deaf ears.

Yes this is a great story. A nightmare story but a story to remember. So this still happens? Does anyone know, can anyone really bring to life a true story like this that is happening today???

You skipped over the sex. Lit-erotica. Get it?

I love how well-written this story is. I also like the lack of justice. The couple became willing participants and trained heavily. Don's transition was refreshing. I'm glad he embraced his role as 'boi' and accepted their enslavement.

The premise of the story has merit, unfortunately there was little detail with regards to the sexual training of the slaves, this story could have been so much better if you had started elaborating on the changes to the slaves mindset during their training journey once they had begun to be weened off of their psychedelics, what they had experienced etc.

Yes this still happens, but not with these high bid pay outs, and drugs can be used to brainwash people. Don’t that just suck! No one should be force to be a slave to anyone especially rich fucks..

WIFETHEIF'S USE OF LITEROTICA

One of the virtues of Wifetheif's writings is his use of the Literotic form not to appeal to fantastic images of sex and humiliation, but to make a real life point, here an historical one. In the age of the Barbary pirates, the pirates raided the british isles and even Iceland for fair Caucasian women to be mated with tall hearty Africans to work the farms of North Africa.

Wifetheif puts Bonnie to pasture in Brazil. I'm not sure that white women were used in reproduction of in Brazil to produce beautiful children, particularly valuable in the Brazilian market, but in addition to North Africa, white women in indentured service were likely put to this use in the British West Indies.

Why Don/Doug's owner had his male prize rendered impotent seems to be a waste of the owner's investment.

SECOND TIME AROUND

Kidnapped on Second Honeymoon was intended as an improvement on an earlier piece, Kidnapped on Honeymoon. Indeed there is more detail, but both fall afoul of economy of scale: this specialized form of kidnapping, training and sale would simply become too expensive.

If the couple were such desirable mating stock why would the owner of the male have a vasectomy performed. T maid who found the male attracted, could be co-opted to reproduce for resale.

The concept is intriguing. It was intimated by a commentator on the earlier piece that the concept was further developed and many of these "kinks" for want of a better term were cured in a later piece ENSLAVED ON ALIEN WORLD and a companion piece. Unfortunately, these items are no longer posted. Still a worthy project.