All Comments on 'Second Time Around'

I thought this was great, you could make this a series....so much we could learn about them and how they develop sexually...Don't stop, write some more please.

I agree that this could be a series, but a series about different people and their second times around. This story stands strongly by itself. It's a wonderful romance with just the right amount of sex.

This is what erotic literature should be, an almost perfect blend of the physical and the emotional. When a story is this well told, it hardens the body and softens the heart. Nothing else pushes my buttons quite like that!

This is the kind of story I've been looking for on Literotica. I've loved other stories, but this one reminds me of Lara's Vineyard and others by Ronde, who's been the best Romance writer I've read here. Just ordinary people who find someone to love, and written so well that it's like we readers know them.

This was a real feel good story and should be used by others as a standard. I am going to sign off and give my wife a big kiss.

The only way I can describe my reaction is this: I can't remember ever reading a story that had my heart pounding from genuine eroticism and tender sensuality with such poignancy. There are tears in my eyes and a smile on my face. Fabulous work. I just wonder how much reality was mixed into this story.

Thank you for such a wonderful romantic love story. The three of read it aloud at least two time to make sure we didn't any thing. The way they were conversing reminds me of when I am in a living room or car talking with my wife.

Gave it a 5 only because the scale does not go to 7.

A well told story of a second chance that everyone deserves to have. Great job.

A gentle tale of love found again, written well!

Thank You

John

Life does go on, it just sometimes takes awhile to get there. When things go right it can be just as good or even better, that is no slur on the the one that was lost, it just happens. Beautiful story, well written!

I really loved your 2nd time love story. It was beautiful and didn't have depressing line in it. Thanks for your submission.

This was a nice romance story. I like how they got married and Catherine ended up getting pregnant. Good Job. toby9790.

know that it's the best of yours that I have read thus far. I'm trying to read them in order of submittal, and I have enjoyed all. But I think your writing is improving, not that it needed much. I look forward to more enjoyment to come. It is refreshing to read about real people types in life-type situations but still have erotic couplings to add spice. You avoid the huge breasts, mammoth penis, beautiful persons that seem to appear in most erotic stories, and make the ordinary seem extraordinary. That has kept me an avid reader. Thanks.

Wonderful romance story, a little short be a great read. 5++stars