All Comments on 'Secret Admirer Ch. 01'

An excellent Valentines Story. I'm not into stalkers, but this is a fantastic start to what promises to be an interesting and enthralling story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

intriguing, well written, leaves you wanting MORE......please?

This is a lovely beginning! I can't wait for more. Seriously. Be compassionate and write quickly:)

Nicely done, good characters, and a nice set up. Can't wait to read more.

Brilliant start! You've got me intriued now and looking forward to where you take this story. Love your writing style and your characters. Very good!

I really like how well-written this story is. I'm not really into m/m stuff, but I really did enjoy this one. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Gabriel could be sweet Sebastian's avenging angel (although he's probably a wolf). Sebastian seems to be falling fast for Gabriel's chivalrous, protective nature. I too am looking forward to the next chapter to see what they do next!

i am honestly not really into gay stories but this was really well written with great charter development look forward to more

Please do post more chapters. PJ xx

I love this first chapter....u have done a fabulous job with the characters and plot so far. Cant wait to read the rest of it.

I will be checking everyday for ur next posting

Can't leave it there! more please :)

Been waiting long enough!

You can not leave us hanging like this - pretty please

when you tittle something with a chapter 01: than it follows that there should be a chapter 02:.

this storey has left so many questions un awnsered and the relationship between charcters unresolved

I like the way the story flowed. I guess I am a lot like Sebastian and the way he felt about things. No mater how long it takes, PLEASE, continue on with this story and use as many chapters as necessary. So far I rate it 5-star.

I thought chapter one was just wonderful. How come you never wrote anymore?