All Comments on 'Secret Diary of a Vampire Teen'

This is your very best yet!

This has been such a good read I have not been able to stop lol it is now on its way to 2:30 am and I am very tired and annoyed at myself that I got completely swept away by this story and have not gone to sleep as I have a early morning ahead.

To find a read that can do this to me is A VERY rare happening, good job

This was amazing I normally don't care for vampire storys but this pulled me in I couldn't stop reading and I do believe it made me thirsty and extremely horny ...

The Comment title tells it all. A very, very well written story with an enjoyable plot and good character development. I pray that you are not going to end the adventures of the evil 4-somes. You have so much, much more to write about, Sandra & Susan in Europe, Helen in Mexcio and Amalia in Hawaii. Plus the mayhem along with Dr. Cortes plans for them while at the university. Then there is when Susan will be granted her greatest desire, To join Sandra, Helen, and Amalia as a vampire. I hope Susan drains her sick father, the jeck. You write from each of the girl's point of view. You could write a long story POV with each girl. Then another story about their 4 years at the university doing whatever Dr. Cortes has on his mind like studing how many bites it takes to change a person into a vampire. Whatever plot line you take, Please, please DO NOT END the story here. You are a good writer and good writer never leanes his reader/fans with an unfinished story

Thanks a lot for your praises, it's always a nice way to start the day.

Just wanted to let you know that I've already started working on the next part of Sandra's adventures, both in Europe and at the University. You can find them on chyoa.com under the title : The secret Diary of a teenage vamp: Freshman year.

It's still not finished but you already have a bit to chew on. I haven't worked on it in a while because of my work, but I hope it'll go slower sometime in the near future and that I'll be able to retake the keyboard to finish it soon.

I haven't thought about following Amalia and Helen on their holyday because I wanted to stick to the "diary" format of the story although it might be fun. I'll think about it. First I want to finish the Freshman year piece and then I have two other stories bugging me before I can clear my schedule and maybe retake the holyday of the two other girls.

Hope you like it, don't hesitate to comment further and give feedback.