All Comments on 'Secret Fantasies Ch. 04'

by TheNaughtyWife

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Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesover 9 years ago
Not bad

The sex was top-notch in this story, but the dialogue felt kind of wooden and forced.

DaddysGoldenGirlDaddysGoldenGirlover 9 years ago
Great stuff!

I really enjoyed this series, I hope you write more of Annabeth's adventures.

spankfunforspankfunforover 5 years ago
Exciting!

From Virgin to Piss Whore and Slut Girl In Less Than 2 Hours! This Story Was Sexy, Fast Paced and Just Plain Fun; Like ALL Of Your Writing! I Love That No Topic is Off-Limits! Great Imagination!

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