All Comments on 'Secret Lesbian Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good start but went too far

Should write more about the angst of seeing roommates partially naked and faking interest in the guys. You have a lot to offer.

Wolf_StarwalkerWolf_Starwalkerabout 10 years ago
Good

I actually like this. Normally I am really picky whn it comes to stories but I'm glad I decided to give this a read*

DCohen2349DCohen2349about 10 years ago
Sorry, Not My Cup Of Tea

The whole premise that in this day and age a woman would go to such lengths to keep her lesbianism a secret just doesn't work for me.

And how does she know that her secret will be kept if she follows all the orders? Or that her actions aren't being recorded for further blackmail?

Stephen7RedoStephen7Redoabout 10 years ago
Wow!

I don't usually read much Lesbian literature...but damn, am I glad I read yours! My gosh, I was grabbed and in the story quickly and got so wrapped up in the ladies...okay, and hard, too!

Really, nice eroticism...nice premise, nice imagination.

Just one question...where can I get that pillow!!! :)

Thank you,

Stephen

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